Once Upon A Dance (STH Fan Fiction by Esther)


Three boys… Three girls… Another cliché high school romance. And it all started once upon a dance…

(Did this description make you facepalm or groan or roll your eyes?)


This may be considered inappropriate to some readers. So, to let you know, this post includes images of (hopefully mildly, I don’t know if my opinion is entirely accurate) mildly sexy outfits (for the evil girls), mild kissing, the song “Wicked Game” by Chris Isaak is also featured in here, and a couple of confrontations with the villains.


Estrella Chara Hutchinson: Seventeen year-old female hedgehog with chocolate brown fur and ice-blue eyes with pale peach skin. She has one long, straight bang combed over to the left side of her face like a K-Pop star and five spines like Amy’s but thicker and down to her shoulder blades and curl up slightly at the tips. Her eyelashes are very long and curly.

Mary Edith Grace Hutchinson: Sixteen year-old female hedgehog with dark blonde fur and blue eyes with slightly freckled peach skin. Her bang is styled similar to Estrella’s but it’s shorter, thicker, and wavy, and it curls up slightly at the end. Her spines are also similar to Estrella’s but slightly shorter, thicker, wavier, and curl up more at the ends. Her eyelashes are very dark and thick. Also, Mary Edith is her whole first name, but her friends just call her “Mary”.

Georgie Amore Hutchinson: Fourteen year-old female hedgehog with light brown fur and gray-blue eyes with peach skin. She has very short spines like Amy’s and a short thick bang that curls over her forehead. Her eyelashes are thick and curly. Despite being the youngest sister, she’s taller than both of them with long legs and body.

Characters I Don’t Need To Describe So I’ll Just List Their Names

Sonic The Hedgehog

Shadow The Hedgehog

Silver The Hedgehog

Scourge The Hedgehog

Sally Acorn

Blaze The Cat

Amy Rose

Breezie The Hedgehog

Wave The Swallow

Fiona Fox

Rouge The Bat

Knuckles The Echidna

Tails The Fox

Charmy The Bee

Author’s Note

Sorry that this isn’t an X Reader or RP of any kind, but if you want, you can describe your OC’s in the comments and I’ll let them make cameos, or if I’m not being lazy, make them main characters in the story. Thank you so much if you are reading this! I hope you enjoy the story! (I do not own any of the characters or images in this story, except for my own.)

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Chapter 1: The Dance

Estrella’s POV

It was a beautiful day in the late Summer/early Autumn. A week ago, Georgie’s friend Amy Rose invited us to a formal teenager dance party. The last few days had been stressful as we rushed around getting fitted for dresses, buying new shoes, going to the salon to get our hair and nails done, applying makeup. But now we were ready, and waiting for our ride to show up.

The only unfortunate thing about this night was the fact that we were carpooling with some of our friends’ (Amy, Sally, and Blaze) oldest enemies (Fiona, Breezie, Wave, and Rouge).

Their rivalry had started long ago, when each of these apparently evil girls had betrayed or harmed our friends in some way. Things weren’t so bad between us and Rouge as she usually helped us more than she hurt, but tensions were high between the others.

I stood in front of the mirror, admiring myself one more time.

I also looked over at Mary Edith’s outfit.

And Georgie’s.

I smiled. We were beautiful. So were our friends. I looked around the room.

Amy Rose.

Sally Acorn.

Blaze The Cat.

A car horn beeped outside as Rouge’s rented white limo pulled up in front of the house. We all rushed out into the cool night air. The door opened and I was one of the first to slip inside. I shivered, sliding over into the corner and buckling my seatbelt.

I looked around the car at my friends enemies. (Frenemies?)

Rouge The Bat (My friend, sort of.)

Fiona Fox

Breezie The Hedgehog

Wave The Swallow

They were impeccably beautiful. I looked down at myself doubtfully. Was I dressed up enough after all? I brushed aside my worry. I wasn’t going to let self-consciousness ruin my evening. One by one, my sibs and friends stepped into the car. Amy, Sally, and Blaze all sat on the the far side from Rouge, Fiona, Breezie and Wave.

“Hello girls, how’s the weather?” Breezie smirked.

“Freezing!” Georgie exclaimed. They snickered. We ignored them, though Georgie looked a little hurt and Amy was offended for her.

The car started and the whole drive was spent in silence. Some of us played with our phones, others examined our dresses and made a few final changes to our makeup, and some watched the TV at the front, which was playing some kind of romantic tragedy I didn’t care to see.

Finally, we pulled up in front of the building that had been rented for the party. I could see the colorful lights flashing and even faintly hear the beat of the music that was playing inside. Good. That meant it was super loud.

I rushed up the walkway and entered, stopping for a moment inside to let the vibrations of the music fill my chest. I sighed and made my way through the crowd until I found a clear spot for some solo dancing. I spun, clapped, bopped my shoulders, and moved my hips. A few kids got up and joined me, and we had some laughs. After the song ended, I made my way to the refreshment table, where Mary Edith was already waiting with Blaze.

“Thirsty?” Mary Edith asked, offering me a paper cup filled with my favourite cream soda.

“Yes, thank you.” I said breathlessly, taking it. I put the straw in my mouth and drank, watching the crowd mingle. I smiled as I saw a few familiar faces making their way over. Sonic The Hedgehog, Tails The Fox, Knuckles The Echidna, and Amy, Georgie, and Sally.

“Careful not to spill on your dress. It really is a pretty one.” Amy said. I smiled.

“Thank you. I promise I’m being careful.” I said, and put my hand over my mouth to cover a belch.

“GROSS!” Georgie giggled.

“I beg your pardon.” I said in a stuffy British accent and we all snickered. Another song started playing and Sonic looked at Mary Edith with a shy smile. I had time to observe a few things.

1: Sonic was going to ask Mary Edith to dance.

2: Amy was waiting for Sonic to ask Mary Edith to dance because she knew Mary Edith would say “No” and then she could jump in and say that she’d love to.

3: The frenemies and Scourge were coming toward us from one direction and would surely find some way to wreck our evening if I didn’t get us out of there.

4: Shadow, my ex-boyfriend, was coming toward us from the other direction and if he reached us, it would just be really awkward for me.

5: I had approximately ten seconds to get everyone out onto the dancefloor before catastrophe struck.

“Hey, Mary, wanna dance?” Sonic asked. Mary Edith opened her mouth to say “No”.

“She’d love to!” I cut in, pushing her toward Sonic. “Just be careful, she’s got two left feet!” I knew saying that would make Mary Edith determined to prove me wrong regardless of how she felt about public dancing. She sighed and took Sonic’s hand.

“Why not?” She asked, shooting me a glare over her shoulder as she walked away. I wouldn’t be surprised if I found a pile of ice cubes in my bed tonight.

Silver looked at Georgie shyly. “Do you… want to…?” He blushed. “I mean…”

“Sure!” Georgie giggled and blushed, taking his hand as they walked out onto the dancefloor.

Amy sighed. “I’ll just dance with Tails then! C’mon Tails!” She grabbed his hand and dragged him onto the dancefloor before he could say anything. He looked back at the chocolate chip cookies longingly, before turning back to Amy with a resigned expression.

Sally saw Shadow, looked at me, smiled, and then walked up to meet him. I couldn’t hear what they were saying, but she pointed to the dancefloor and then grabbed his hands and pulled him onto it before he could refuse. She smiled at me over his shoulder and I smiled back, grateful.

“Oh, Knux! I saved a dance for you!” Rouge called, signaling that the frenemies had arrived. The bewildered echidna blushed redder than his fur as she took his hand and dragged him off.

“I… need to relieve myself.” Blaze said awkwardly, and left in the direction of the restrooms. I sighed in relief that all my friends were safe and turned to go. But then Fiona’s voice stopped me.

“Hi, Estrella. Cute dress. I might have to borrow that someday.” She said in her usual annoying smug way. I turned back to face her. She had one arm around her boyfriend, Scourge’s, neck, Breezie and Wave flanked them on either side. They looked like glittery, multi-coloured Stormtroopers. I smiled at the thought.

“Sorry, I don’t think it’s your colour.” I said in reply to her earlier comment. She smirked.

“What if it’s not your colour?” She challenged.

“Then I wouldn’t have worn it.” I said matter-of-factly. She smiled.

“You’ve gotten faster at your come-backs. Still need to work on that wit though.” She said. Scourge grinned.

“Hey, why don’t you ditch the fuzzy cuddle-buddies and hang out with us?” He asked.

“No thanks, I’ve got this thing about coming within six feet of any jerks.” I said, turning to go.

“Be careful what you say to us,” Scourge said, and I stopped but didn’t turn around. “You won’t always have Sonic and his friends around to protect you.”

I smirked at him over my shoulder. “Is that you trying to sound threatening? Needs work. And I don’t need Sonic to protect me from losers like you.” I turned and walked away before they could say anything else. Wow, that was kind of awesome! I thought, grinning.

“Hi, Estrella! Wanna come dance?” I heard Charmy The Bee call. I guess Vector couldn’t find him a babysitter and had no choice but to bring him to this supposed ‘teenager’ party. Not that I minded, as long as Vector was being a responsible guardian. I smiled at the little bee.

“Sure!” I said, walking over.


I exited the restroom and was heading back to my friends when my phone pinged. So I pulled it out of my pocket to check. It was a text from my mother, Laura, asking how everything was going. I told her it was going good and slipped my phone back into my pocket just as I bumped into someone’s back.

“I’m sorry!” I cried, stumbling back. “I wasn’t looking where I was going–.” I cut off when I saw who it was. “You.” I said flatly. Scourge grinned.

“Ouch! What’d I ever do to you?” He said.

“Oh, let’s see…” I said, tilting my head in thought. “There was that time on your first day at school when you tripped me and I had to go to the nurse’s office to get that huge cut on my forehead taken care of, or that time when you dumped pepper all over my lunch, or that time you egged and TP’d my house on Halloween, or that time you dumped a bucket of slime, or that time you put pepper spray in the vents of the school and blamed it on me, and the horrors have continued up to not too long ago, when you tried to threaten me.” Scourge laughed.

“Yeah, good times. But seriously, that was a long time ago. Like, fifteen minutes ago! Quit living in the past!” He said. I scoffed, rolling my eyes, but really I was trying not to laugh.

“Well, I have to get back to my friends now.” I said, as a slow song started playing.

“The fuzzy cuddle-buddies?” He asked.

“Yes, the fuzzy cuddle-buddies.” I replied, and Scourge chuckled.

“I have to go.” I said, trying to get around him. He moved to block me.

“Dance with me.” He said. I didn’t think he was serious, but then he grabbed my hand and pulled me onto the dancefloor. I wanted to say “No”, but there was something oddly compelling about the way he smiled at me and held my hands expectantly. I sighed, and put my hands on his shoulders as he put his on my hips, and we started to slow-dance.

I didn’t want to look into his eyes, so I just focused on the music and my movements. (The song playing is “Wicked Game” by Chris Isaak and some of you may recognize the song from Jumanji: The Next Level.)

Not my first choice of song, but it seemed more mature than “Tubby Wubby Pony Waifu”.

For some inexplicable reason, I looked up. Scourge was watching me through half-lidded eyes. He smiled and put his arm around my hips, dipping me so I could feel the tips of my spines brush against the floor. He pulled me back up and wrapped his arms around my waist. Without thinking, I wrapped mine around his neck. This is too close. I thought, but I didn’t really care.

Scourge stopped suddenly and I looked up at him, confused. He leaned his forehead against mine and whispered hoarsely, “Kiss me.” And pressed his lips against mine. I stiffened in shock, and heard someone in the crowd gasp. “SCOURGE IS KISSING ESTRELLA!” He or she screamed, and the whole party stopped. Guess even DJ Vector couldn’t handle the horrific sight.

I pushed on Scourge’s chest until he let go and I stumbled back a few steps. He took one step toward me and I held up my hand. “Stay away from me!” I snarled. I thought I saw a flash of hurt in his eyes before they wandered over my shoulder and he grinned evilly.

“S’up Blue?” He said. I turned to see Sonic and Mary Edith standing behind me.

“You’ve got a lot of nerve.” Sonic said, pointing accusingly.

“What is going on here?” Sally asked, coming over to me.

“I saw it! Scourge assaulted Estrella!” Amy said, coming to my other side.

“It was just a kiss.” Scourge said. By now, everyone was looking at us, and I was blushing uncontrollably.

“I never gave you permission to kiss me.” I said in a low voice. I was angry and embarrassed.

“I have never asked permission for anything in my life and I’m not about to start.” Scourge said matter-of-factly. I felt Mary Edith take me by the hand and lead me away from him before things got violent.

“Are you okay?” She asked, concerned. I nodded. Mary was the only one who knew my secret.

I had a crush on Scourge.


Hi, guys! Hope you enjoyed. If you have any questions about this post, please leave them in the comments below. If you feel something was too inappropriate or vague or whatever, let me know and I’ll do what I can to make it better. See you next time! Esther, out.

Seasons Elemental Powers Personality Quiz

My first personality quiz on this blog! So, this isn’t going to be as simple as a Quotev quiz where you can simply select your answer and the computer will calculate your results for you. You will need a pencil or pen and a piece of scrap paper that you don’t care very much about so you can throw it away when you’re done, but is still big enough to write a series of letters on and count them up to determine your result. DON’T LEAVE YET!!! It’s not as bad as it sounds, I promise! Let’s start!

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Question 1: What is your preferred temperature?

A. Hot.

B. Cold.

C. Warm.

D. Cool.

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Question 2: What is your favourite colour? (Generic question? Maybe so, but who cares?)

A. Bright and bold colours. Like red, orange, and gold.

B. Cool, pale colours. Like blue, white, and silver.

C. Pastels. Pink, purple, yellow…etc.

D. Rich, natural shades. Like brown and amber. Or darker colours.

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Question 3: What is your favourite season?

A. Summer!!! >:D

B. Winter!

C. Spring! ❤

D. Autumn.

Question 4: Which of these is your favourite power?

A. Super speed.

B. Invisability.

C. Super strength.

D. Flight.

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Question 5: Which of these would you rather do with your friends?

A. Camping.

B. Skating.

C. Gardening.

D. Nature walk.

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Question 6: What would you rather do in your free time?

A. Ride a bike.

B. Build a snowman.

C. Pick flowers.

D. Read a book.

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Question 7: Which of these wild animals is your favourite?

A. Wolf

B. Snow Leopard

C. Grizzly Bear

D. Fox

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Question 8: Which would you keep as a pet?

A. Dog

B. Kitten

C. Bunny

D. Hedgehog

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Question 9: What is your style?

A. Shorts, tank tops, T-shirts, jeans, sandals or sneakers.

B. Wool sweaters, turtlenecks, dark pants, fuzzy booties.

C. Lacy shirts/skirts, frilly dresses, flats, leggings, clogs.

D. Leather jackets, long sleeves, skinny pants, combat boots.

Question 10: Which of these is your favourite mythical animal?

A. Dragon

B. Amarok

C. Winged Unicorn

D. Griffin

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Question 11: Which is your birth month?

A. June, July, August.

B. December, January, February.

C. March, April, May.

D. September, October, November.

Question 12: What do you hope you have?

A. Pyrokinesis!

B. Hydrokinesis/Cryokinesis!

C. Terrakinesis/Geokinesis!

D. Aerokinesis/Electrokinesis!

Mostly A’s

You have pyrokinesis!

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Fire powers! Nice! This could be the ability to manifest anything that burns, make you fire-resistant, or allow you to fly with flames. Others with this power include Pyro (X-Men), The Human Torch (Fantastic 4), Helsa (Fan-made knock-off of Elsa with fire-powers), Bruni (Frozen 2), Blaze The Cat (Sonic The Hedgehog), and Kai (LEGO Ninjago).

Mostly B’s

You have Hydrokinesis or Cryokinesis!

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Hydrokinesis is the ability to manifest and manipulate water. With this power, you could control anything in its liquid form and even breathe underwater! Cryokinesis is the ability to manipulate ice. You could also control snow. In a way, the two are connected, so you could even have both! Others with Hydrokinesis include Nokk (Frozen 2), Chaos (Sonic The Hedgehog), and Nya (LEGO Ninjago). Others with Cryokinesis include Elsa (Frozen), Robert Drake “Iceman” (X-Men), Periwinkle and Silvermist (Tinkerbell), and Zane (LEGO Ninjago).

Mostly C’s

You got Geokinesis or Terrakinesis!

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Geokinesis/Terrakinesis is the ability to manipulate earth and nature. In a way, it might be the most powerful of of all, as it is connected to all the elements. You can move mountains, cause earthquakes, talk to animals, manipulate plants, and even create and manipulate gemstones, crystals, and metal! Others with this power include The Earth Giants (Frozen 2), Cole (LEGO Ninjago), Poison Ivy (Batman), Rosetta and Faun (Tinkerbell), Fluttershy (My Little Pony), and Magneto (X-Men).

Mostly D’s

You have Aerokinesis/Electrokinesis!

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You are one with the wind and sky! You have the ability to create powerful windstorms that could wipe out entire cities! You can make it snow, hail, and rain. You can move things with wind. You can even fly with wind! Others with this power include Gale (Frozen 2), Vidia (Tinkerbell), Morro (LEGO Ninjago), and Storm (X-Men).

And that’s THE END! Thank you so much for reading this! Make sure to like and comment your results! See you next time!

Upcoming Personality Quizzes!

Here’s a list of the quizzes I’m planning to create here on WordPress!

Seasons Elemental Powers

A quiz that tells which of the four elemental powers you would have based on your personality. Each season has an Element. Spring = Earth/Nature, Summer = Fire, Autumn = Wind/Sky, Winter = Ice.

Your Inheritance Cycle Dragon

Based on Christopher Paolini’s Inheritance Cycle. Since the dragons are back, I thought it would be great to make a quiz that tells you what colour and personality your dragon has, along with a few suggestions for names.


This is mostly for girls, though I’m thinking of also making one for boys in the future. Another Generic Sonic WWFFY with a selection of popular characters and a series of simple (ahem! dumb) questions that lead up to a corny romantic RP result.

WWFFY Sonic The Hedgehog Heroes Edition

A cliché high school romance with STH. Basically Once Upon A Time & Equestria Girls in Sonic. Nobody has any powers or chaos energy or memory of their life before. But, bright side, they wear clothes now!

WWFFY Sonic The Hedgehog Villains Edition

Same as the one above, but with villains for results instead of heroes. This is where you will go if you were hoping for Scourge or Jet or Mephiles.

My Little Pony: Which Pony Are You?

I will create a few characters, and you will see which one you are. Along with which Element of Harmony you wield. This will also be a preview for an RP series I’m thinking of starting.

These are the ones I’m gonna be focusing on for now. More on the way!

The True Meaning Of Tolerance

Do you believe you’re tolerant? Even for people who disagree with you? If you’re Left, could you get along with someone who’s Right? And vice-versa?

What DOES tolerance mean to you? Only talking with people who have matching opinions to your own? Only being friends with people in the same political group as you? Threatening the people who celebrated the new president’s election, complaining nonstop about him (or her) for four years straight, and then telling them to “Suck it up! Like WE sucked it up!” when they point out that your favorite candidate hasn’t really been elected yet? To viciously attack people in opposite political groups on the street? To troll and hate on people you disagree with online, and then say you’re happy they’re dead when they commit suicide because of it?

If you do all that and then call yourself a tolerant person, I’m sorry but you’re not. If you believe that you are, then you are VERY deceived.

I had an experience with one such person on a 16Personalities website. He claimed to be tolerant of other’s opinions. And he was asking us what we would do if we found out God was real but stood for everything we were against. I said I would worship Him anyway since He knows what is right, and almost every person there attacked me. But especially the one who asked the question. When I pointed out that he wasn’t being tolerant with me, he only said that he was tired and “you blindly religious people, ya’ll don’t sit well with me.” (emphasis added by me).

That is not tolerance! Okay?! You cannot claim to be tolerant, and then treat people that way! Sure, you can present your opinions and even argue a little bit, but you cannot crush them and tell them to shut up!

Don’t make people feel bad for their opinions. They have a good reason for believing what they believe just the same as you do. You have to be tolerant as a friend, family member, and resident of Earth where there are billions of people with different opinions.

Why don’t we all give tolerance, REAL tolerance, a try?

Untitled STH Fan Fiction By Esther

So, this is some random Sonic The Hedgehog fan fiction by me. I’m gonna warn you know, each part that I post is probably gonna take place at a different point in time. Example: Present, Present, Flashback, Future, Flashback, Present, Future, etc, etc. But I’m gonna do my best to make sure it all works together as part of the story. I haven’t picked a title yet, so if at some point down the line, one of you comes up with a good one, post it in the comments, we’ll vote on it, and my FanFic will be named!

Includes: Romance, Drama, Gore, (possibly horror), Cute, (maybe limes), tragedy (maybe).

Copyrighted Characters I’m Using

(The likeliness of each one’s appearance is rated on a scale of 1 to 10.)

Sonic The Hedgehog__9

Shadow The Hedgehog__10

Silver The Hedgehog__8

Tails The Fox__8

Amy Rose__5

Sally Acorn__5

Knuckles The Echidna__5

Scourge The Hedgehog__10

Mephiles The Dark__1

Other Evil Twins and/or prisoners in the No Zone__3

Zonic and other Zone Cops__4

Fan-Made Characters I’m Using

(Likelihood of appearance is again rated on a scale of 1 to 10.)

Esther Hutchinson__10

Marideth Hutchinson__9

Georgia Hutchinson__8

Ulrich Hutchinson__4

Other__We’ll see what happens…

The first part will be posted shortly.

Upcoming Role Plays!!!

These are the RPs I’m thinking of posting. Here’s how this works, I post the ideas, and you readers vote on the ones you like best. The one with the most votes will be the first one to launch.

How To Train Your Dragon: Dragon Mountain

Takes place about sixteen years after Hidden World. There is a mountain beyond the Hidden World of Dragons that reaches up into the clouds. It is populated by humans and dragons alike. And any person who reaches the age of twelve years and older is considered grown-up, and has the choice of training their own dragon. If you have any questions, please leave them in the comments.


Powerful beings exiled from their home dimension, separated from everyone they love. And worst of all, they don’t remember anything. This RP will be full of mythical creatures and characters from every franchise you love! (As long as I’m familiar with it.)

Wings Of Fire RP

I don’t have anything ready for this yet, but it would help if you guys would create your characters and provide suggestions for a story that we can build together as we go along.

Sonic The Hedgehog x Reader Wedding

Basically what it says in the title. I’ll create a series of weddings when you get married to the Sonic The Hedgehog characters of your dreams. Yes, I take requests.

Those are all the RPs I have ready! If you have any suggestions, leave them in the comments right after your votes! That’s all folks!

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